Page 1

The Jungles buzzed with the game of life in rapid succession. She laid there in her tree waiting patiently for her prey. No interest was shown in the small rodent who ate a mushroom ,or was it for the wild feline who killed the rodent , but her interest was piked as a Invisible hand crushed the wild feline! Slowly the Image of what she had been hunting for the entire day showed. A large three eyed horned creature who smiled appetizingly at his catch. Such shame that he's joy fled so soon as her tail slowly constricted around his neck. The beast froze as realization struck. This was his finally seconds ,and this was the start of her evening meal."

So this is page one for my little comic. I was wondering how to show what kind of world it is and how to introduce the Naga ,I know she ain't even close to one but please go with me, as a big bad predator.  Also to show what kind of world it takes place in with it's creatures. Now I showed this before posting to my elder brother who had some difficultly understanding what happened. Now please tell me if what you see is easily understandable ,or if it is not. I'm very new to making comics so I welcome all critics. I tried to make all the creatures stay constant in size to one another ,but I know I may have failed in that regard for it's very difficultly for me to perceive such things.

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